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Richbee's avatar

À poem - painting perfect parting remembrance seeing a window reflection.

Nancy Hesting's avatar

That is beautiful, George.

Teyani Whitman's avatar

Almost unspeakable ache.

This lands.

George Bothamley's avatar

I'm glad to know it resonated with you. Thanks for reading.

Tina Rogers's avatar

A sonnet is perfect for this memory of a lost love and you've masterfully avoided cliche and created a tender poem.

George Bothamley's avatar

Thanks a lot, Tina. I appreciate it.